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Writing to the World-Wide Web


Quiz #3: March 5, 1996


Introduction ... sort of

Let's start by considering the first two "quizzes" you've taken this semester. The first one was completed individually, and was full of "right" and "wrong" answers -- pretty traditional identification, short answer, a little coding. The next one we approached collaboratively, and there were no "right" answers. Instead, it was a chance to show off the different ways we can present ideas in hypertextual writing environments.

This third foray into "quiz" land -- and more and more, the use of that term is simply a nod to the language of the traditional classroom -- we will again be working collaboratively, both within and between groups; and while there are few if any "right" answers for the kinds of webs you are building in this exercise, there may be some wrong answers! Read on and we'll see where this is going.

Writing to the Web

Over the last several weeks, particularly lately, we have been discussing the possibility of our class web(s) being appropriate, and being made available, to future classes like this one. It could function as a "text" or as an "example" or a combination -- or perhaps something else entirely.

Now, no matter what you all decide we should do with the collection of final projects, it occured to me last week while I was reading the "Links" Journal Nodes that, in fact, you are all already collaborating on something that will be useful to future classes. What issues are going to matter to students learning about writing to the WWW? Linking. Copyright. Graphics. "Hypertexting." Audience. Credibility. All those things which you have addressed and written about in Quiz #2, and in Journal #6.

More of the same?

As you know, we have been reading -- but have not yet discussed -- the Porush book A Short Guide to Writing About Science  concurrently with all the other work we've done in this class.

You may recall from the first day of the semester that I explained that the Porush text would fill a couple of different roles in this class. First, it is a good "handbook" for writing, and as I have shared, in my opinion most handbooks in the field of writing just suck. (With the notable exception of any book written by someone who is reading this page. Ahem.) Second, in many important ways, writing for the WWW is very much like science writing

The effective science writer knows the importance of clearly communicating ideas to a specific and carefully-defined audience, incorporating graphics, text and concise labels to allow the reader to navigate the text comfortably. The effective science writer also recognizes the standards of the professional field to which the text is directed, and writes within those standards.

The effective and innovative science writer does all of the above -- and also finds ways to press, push and expand, even work outside the "standards of the professional field" in ways that the audience will find challenging but not disorienting.

I will not insult your intellegence by now pointing out how each and every one of the above statements relates to web publishing. You're smart -- you can see it. You can also probably see other ways that science writing and web publishing are related. I suspect -- expect! -- that you will also see inherent flaws in the analogy. I hope you will point them out and suggest alternatives as they occur to you.

Writing (to the WWW)

Writing to the Web is still, at its core, writing. The directions we write may now be multiple (hypertextual vs. linear); what we call "text" may now mean more than simply words and punctuation. But the words, the punctuation, the attention to mechanics, usage and grammar, are all still with us as we move to, from, and among papertext and hypertext. The idea of "introduction," of "conclusion," or of "transition" may now imply something slightly different -- but the ideas themselves are still part of how we read. Therefore, we must pay attention to them as we write.

Some ideas will "translate" better ... a mis-spelled "wurd" is a still a mis-spelled word, whether you are in papertext or hypertext (can you think of exceptions?). A bad introduction -- one which gives the reader either the wrong idea or no idea about the writing to come -- is a bad introduction whether it is a first paragraph or a front node. But ideas about transition ... about citation ... about conclusions ... are these changing?

The Porush book is, in my opinion, the best book I have ever seen for learning to express hard ideas clearly, accessibly, and, whatever this may mean, correctly ... in papertext.  In hypertext, we still want to express ideas clearly, accessibly and correctly ... but ask yourself: how are the definitions of "clarity," of "accessibility" and of "correctness" changing?

There are lots of right answers. And there just may be varying levels of "rightness" -- for instance, asserting that all introductory nodes on the Web should contain the word "baffle" would be mighty hard to defend, but I wouldn't say it's wrong until I read the argument. Meanwhile, there may well be "wrong" answers -- "Spelling and Grammer Don't Matter No More On This Here Web Thingy" would be a bad approach to this writing task. Spelling and grammar -- that's an area where Porush's work may translate more clearly than some others.

Or does it?

How this works

You will be working in (and between) groups of two and three to complete the following tasks. Your group will receive a score based on a 50-point scale; this is the intra-group work on which you should focus. However consider carefully the areas where you can most help each other out! It seems quite likely that, just for one instance, the folks working on graphics-oriented tasks might be able to aid the others in that area, whereas people assigned to the Copy Editing team just might be able to read-comment-edit some of the other sites. This is the inter-group work which you should see as a part of your available resources in completing the assigned tasks.

I should make it clear that the assigned tasks are not necessarily meant to reflect the (future) responsibilities of each team; for instance, it would be quite difficult to build tasks into this kind of assignment appropriate to either "code editing" or "content response," as both would require waiting for something else to be produced. This quiz is simply a chance for you to learn to work together. With that in mind, in case you have forgotten who is assigned to what "team," here again is the list:

  • COPY TEAM: Bettuchi, Finan, Mitchell, Pellegrini, Rooney, Wade
  • CONTENT TEAM: Crewell, Deorsey, Draper, Malloy, Weidt
  • CODE TEAM: Jablonski, Kotmel, Lavertue, Mardirosian, Phoenix, Westmorland
  • GRAPHICS TEAM: Brennan, Burdick, Herr, Morales, Spencer

    The very first thing every group should do is spend a little time looking at how other classes engaged in web writing are dealing with the issue(s) in your particular writing task. How can you learn from these forays onto the web? Look for material you can emulate, use, borrow, build upon, counteract, disagree with ... and consider carefully how you should approach the use of that material. Do you need to contact anyone? Beforehand? After the fact? Explain any decisions you may make in this regard in an e-mail message to Karen and me after you have completed (or at least, "turned in") your website.

  • Group 1: Bettuchi, Pellegrini, Rooney

  • Group 2: Finan, Mitchell, Wade

  • Group 3: Deorsey, Malloy, Weidt

  • Group 4: Crewell, Draper

  • Group 5: Jablonski, Lavertue, Westmorland

  • Group 6: Kotmel, Mardirosian, Phoenix

  • Group 7: Brennan, Spencer
  • Group 8: Burdick, Herr, Morales

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